Kelly Rettka

Kelly Rettka

Kelly Rettka
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I could hear a faint moaning on the opposite side of the door. I banged on it hard. No answer. I banged again. Still nothing. The moaning was getting louder. I turned the handle and swung the door open. A girl was sitting on his bed with her top half completely exposed and she didn't try to cover herself when I stared. From behind her I saw two beady yellow eyes and a smile that made my stomach clench, "You here to finish me off, Sweetheart?"

I could hear a faint moaning on the opposite side of the door. I banged on it hard. No answer. I banged again. Still nothing. The moaning was getting louder. I turned the handle and swung the door open. A girl was sitting on his bed with her top half completely exposed and she didn't try to cover herself when I stared. From behind her I saw two beady yellow eyes and a smile that made my stomach clench, "You here to finish me off, Sweetheart?"

We all know those tired clichés. It’s time to kill them. Take one of them and turn them on their heads or at least these will hopefully keep the errors out of your writing. If you think of any other way to change them up go right ahead. Happy hunting!

We all know those tired clichés. It’s time to kill them. Take one of them and turn them on their heads or at least these will hopefully keep the errors out of your writing. If you think of any other way to change them up go right ahead. Happy hunting!

you'vealwayswornglasses

you'vealwayswornglasses

writing prompt

writing prompt

Like he can only protect her imagination by being a "mythical creature" and scaring her, even though he hates doing it, since her parents try to wash out all creativity!!!

Like he can only protect her imagination by being a "mythical creature" and scaring her, even though he hates doing it, since her parents try to wash out all creativity!!!

writing prompt:

writing prompt:

Finnick to Aquila. Or maybe haymitch. More

Finnick to Aquila. Or maybe haymitch. More

Writing Prompt #13 | tomiadeyemi.com

Writing Prompt #13 | tomiadeyemi.com